anonymous posted on 11/28/19:
- Ivypool2005
- Nov 29, 2019
- 1 min read
NOTE FROM IVY: You can't be anonymous here. This post is only anonymous because the OP on the doc didn't give a username. If you submit a post to me without a username, I will not post it.
I’m going to stay anonymous just in case no one likes it, but if you don’t, I love helpful criticism! I saw some people posting about poetry and I thought I’d do it too. My friends and I did this thing today where we try to write poems and such off random topics. My friend picked death and love for today, I don’t know why. But here’s some of my work:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet
And so are you
But the roses have wilted
The violets are dead
The sugar bowl is empty
My wrists are stained red
But you’re always here
You’ve never left my side
And that’s why I love you through low or high tide
There’s also this one which kind of resembles a sacrifice of life for death:
I’m sorry I can’t go on like this
You’re the pulled trigger to the greatest dread
But I am always thinking of you
Even if you were dead
Every time I put it off
It kills me deep inside
Everything will come to an end
It’s something the universe can’t hide
Know never again will you see the light
And that this is one we cannot mend
But a last note you need, and important one indeed
Is that I love you on and on without end
So as the dying sun starts to fade
You feel your feeling float away
And I fall to my knees, crying in vain.
If you think it’s dark, I did not choose the topic. Let me know what you think!
@ivypool2005 replied:
Lol it's ok :) Just try to remember in the future.
@thecoven4ever replied
Ack sorry
@ivypool2005 replied:
Hnnngggg please write "@[your username] replied" so we know who it is thanks :)
Oooh nice
@dragondreamer26 replied:
cool I could never do that ,but give me some ice cream and I can binge any tv show.